Monday, July 03, 2006

Beasties

Working on BLOOD SON today, and my hero is majorly conflicted. He's a dhampir (half-human, half-vampire), and he REALLY hates his Daddy. In fact, he hates him so much that he loathes half of himself, the dark half, anything he sees in himself that isn't right and good and moral and decent.

But you don't have to be a beastie or a vampire or a thing-that-goes-bump-in-the-night to have this conflict. I have known plenty of men and women who have wrestled with their darker halves. I have had dear friends diagnosed as bipolar, and I have had friends struggle with mental illness, alcoholism, drug addiction, and abusive relationships. I have had friends who stayed ten years too long in relationships they should have left pretty much after the word, "hello," and I have known people who so hate their own pasts they have run from them their whole lives.

And therein is the secret, I think, to writing about beasties, vampires, and even anti-heroes and murderers. I think the father in THE ROOFER is damn sympathetic even if he tosses his enemies from the rooftop without a thought, and even if he breaks his own son's nose. It's all in the complexity of the dark side, the backstory of why and how someone came to be the beast they are. And I think to write a successful paranormal or fantasy book--or mob book or crime story--you have to be able to go to that dark place and make it understandable even for people who walk mostly in the light.

You have to shine your flashlight under the rock and expose the creepy-crawlies in all our souls. And in the souls of beasties, too.

Sometimes, while you're at it, you can even make a villain a hero. Or at least sympathetic. And you can make a half-monster seem like someone you'd take into your bed. Which reminds me. Off to write a sex scene with said dhampir. And I think it will be hot.

12 Comments:

Blogger Jude Hardin said...

I think you're absolutely right, Erica. Our villains should be sympathetic to some degree. Otherwise, we risk the Dick Dasterdly Syndrome (not to be confused with The Shiny New Idea Syndrome) with flat two-dimensional characters.

Our old friend Hannibal Lecter, for instance, "only ate the rude."
Thomas Harris brought Lecter to life by exploring the character's psyche, not by telling us about all the bad things he did.

It's hard for some authors to truly delve into their villains' dark sides, but I think it's the only way to make them memorable.

9:55 AM, July 04, 2006  
Blogger Erica Orloff said...

Hi Jude:
I have been criticized, on blogs, in the occasional Amazon review, in person at a conference once, of making my heroines too morally gray. I.e., how can I "justify" that a heroine still loves her father though he's a murderer, or her brother, even if he's such an alcoholic he makes vague sexual remarks to her. But I personally think that realistically, most crime families, and most humans, live in a morally gray world and it's more realistic. Otherwise, you risk yet another syndrome (boy, we have a lot on this blog, don't we?) called Too Perfect Syndrome. That was the mistake I made in my first unfinished novel. My heroine was just too passive and perfect.
E

10:00 AM, July 04, 2006  
Blogger Jude Hardin said...

Right again, Erica. Passive and perfect=BORING, IMO. Give me Dirty Harry or Travis Magee any time. I LOVE shades of gray.

11:32 AM, July 04, 2006  
Blogger Erica Orloff said...

Jude:
Well, since I am hopelessly imperfect, maybe you wouldn't find me dull. ;-)

E

12:30 PM, July 04, 2006  
Blogger Jude Hardin said...

I love hopelessly imperfect. :)

2:38 AM, July 05, 2006  
Blogger Erica Orloff said...

Jude:

You wouldn't think it's so great if I tried cooking you a meal and burned it on several attempts and then said, "How do you feel about take-out?" I am awed by those Martha Stewart (Strangely Perfect Syndrome) types. How do they DO that? Cook . . . craft . . . every hair in place.

E

7:47 AM, July 05, 2006  
Blogger Jude Hardin said...

Okay then, I'll do the cooking. :)

Those Martha Stewart types amaze me too. They can take some ordinary things you find around the house (clothes hangers, old CDs, used bubble gum, dryer lint...) and make a beautiful holiday centerpiece. Yay for them.

10:12 AM, July 05, 2006  
Blogger Kathy said...

Erica,

The "beasties" within us make us who we truly are, don't you think? Can you imagine--June Cleaver clones, or, gasp, Perfect Syndrome Martha Stewart cyborgs populating the earth? What a boring place it would be. With errors in judgment, unexpected victimizaiton by those gray and dark ones out there, with the realities of life, those "beasties" within make us who we are.

12:16 PM, July 05, 2006  
Blogger Erica Orloff said...

Kate:
I agree. And I think scary beasts break down into two categories. One is the scary villain we don't relate to at all. Like a sociopath. Most of us CANNOT comprehend a villain, a murderer, with NO conscience. It's terrifying in a cold, chilling way. The other is the villain we DO understand, or see a little bit of ourselves in. I have been watching a friend whose ex-husband is so utterly beastly--and it's not me just taking her side--because I was the Buddhist urging her to try to find a path or way to stay together until it became impossible. He is doing the most vile, awful things to her and her kids . . . and tormenting her--and DELIGHTING it in, and WORSE, he has a Shiny New Fiancee (as you can see we love giving things proper names on this blog) who delights in saying the most cunning things to the kids. And I watch this and think, "There but for the grace of God go I" as in . . . I NOW can see why one day someone snaps. I could "understand" (not condone) if one day my friend just snapped and ran him over in the road, backed up and did it a few more times. How much can one human take. Therein a villain or beasty who takes matters into his or her own hand . . . scary because it's a dark part of many of us--but we usually don't choose to "go there."

E

12:43 PM, July 05, 2006  
Blogger Kathy said...

Do you ever wonder why some embrace that dark side of their nature?

I can relate to the running-over-with-the-car scenario. (When my husband's mother passed away, suddenly his ex chose become relevant, his son chose to become irreverant, and his brother and sister-in-law chose to be cruel and greedy.)

And along with that dark nature comes the Those-Who-Live-in-Glass-Houses theory. I hope your friend is documenting, documenting, documenting (logs of times & happenings, recordings, photos, etc.) Their karma will come back to them, but today's court system could usually use a hand in making it so.

2:54 PM, July 05, 2006  
Blogger Erica Orloff said...

Hi Kate:

Yes, she's documenting like mad. I am trying to get her to "compartmentalize" as much as possible and leave that horrid stuff OVERE THERE in the lawyer box, just so she can get some sleep and eat again. She's very stressed. And SUCH a good mom.

I am sorry to hear about your husband's family. I have to say that as someone who has lived for 15 years with a serious, life-threatening immune disorder, I have seen firsthand the whole wheat/chaff idea. Some people are the wheat, and some fall away. Sometimes life or friendships or facing death gets "too hard"--but the courageous ones stick around. Then you know you have a friend for life.

Why do some go to the dark side? You know, I suppose it's a lack of looking inward. I think the more you stop to THINK about who you want to be (a person of peace and compassion or a person of anger), the more you work toward embodying that. I think I used to be, by virture of being assertive, the kind of person who didn't take crap from anyone. But after a while, that gets really wearying . . . and for what? Some people FEED that inner monster and that keeps them from looking in the mirror and really seeing their reflection (as someone who's writing a vampire book right now, at least that's how I look at it).

E

9:43 AM, July 06, 2006  
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