Monday, January 08, 2007

Creating a Villain

I'm knee-deep in creating a villain--perhaps the creepiest one I have ever written. He also needs to have the most depth because he is the villain of a trilogy called THE GEMINI CONSPIRACY, and if I reveal too much right away--or worse, if he seems like a stock villain--then why read books two and three? He has to be really evil, but he has to be three-dimensional.

That's the problem, I think, with some villains. Authors will, for instance, devise sicker and more twisted ways for a serial killer to commit murder. More torture, bloodshed, whatever. But to me, the scariest villains are ones I get to know. Perhaps they seem perfectly normal on the outside. Or perhaps their logic is completely twisted--and yet . . . and yet . . . there's a little bit of understanding of that psyche in all its horror.

The men in THE ROOFER commit some hard-core murders. They laugh about it. They don't ever feel regret. But Ava writes, about her murderous father:

Perhaps all this story needs is context. That is what I tell myself. For isn't it all funny? If I tell the stories just right--with the right inflections, the wittiest dialogue--they are. It wasn't until I met people whose fathers obeyed the law that I understood what I thought was funny was really something else.

I thought all I needed was to place this within a history. To help people understand that what seems like anarchy was really survival. My father was a boy bitten by rats. A young man who grew up with the aura of the Westies--New York's Irish gang--and gangland murders drifing over his life like a heavy smog hovering over the city. A man who felt it was all right to push someone in front of a bus or run over a sergeant. . . . .

Context. That is what villains need, in my opinion. It doesn't make the murder excusable. Or even understandable, but the why--at least in the context of rage or madness or survival instincts--is answered.

In my new book, the villain is a scientist who lost his way. Who moved toward eugenics while believing what he was doing was right. He is frightening for his fanaticism.

What do you think goes into the best villains. Is it context? Something more? The sickest crimes? Or the most understandable reasons? Who is your favorite villain?

16 Comments:

Blogger May said...

I believe that the juxtaposition of evil deeds over reasons normal people (ie not sociopaths) understand and sympathize with makes for the perfect villain.

I always remind myself: Evil is boring.

PS Thanks for giving me an opportunity to use one of my favorite words, juxtaposition. LOL.

9:38 AM, January 08, 2007  
Blogger Meljprincess said...

Hannibal Lecter
(Hannibal, Red Dragon, Silence of the Lambs)

9:38 AM, January 08, 2007  
Blogger Erica Orloff said...

May:
Yes, a brilliant SAT word. :-)

Evil is boring. You know, I never thought of that, but I agree. Think of a slasher film vs., a suspenseful thriller. After a while, you become numbed to the blood and guts--but a well-done thriller can have you at the edge of your seat.

9:57 AM, January 08, 2007  
Blogger Erica Orloff said...

mel:
He is manu people's favorite. I am even curious about the new film coming out February 9th exploring his childhood--because there we will get some of "why." How was he created?
E

9:57 AM, January 08, 2007  
Blogger Jude Hardin said...

Everything you said, Erica.

Plus, I really like to see a villain's mind unravel on stage.

Harris's Buffalo Bill. Stephen King's Cujo. Hitchcock's Norman Bates. These are some of my faves.

I'm in the process of creating a new villain too, and I'm thinking about adding him (parallel subplots, in third person) as a recurring threat in the Colt series.

10:31 AM, January 08, 2007  
Blogger Louise said...

Whenever I work on villains (and I'm not even just talking about the murderous kind), I always close my eyes and think about a specific moment in my life.

I was 23 years old and a young reporter covering the biggest story of my virgin career -- the possible release from prison of a serial killer. I was sent up north to cover his trial on a weapons charge in prison (if convicted, he would stay in prison). For months, I had been getting to know his victims' families, the prosecutors, the cops. They had built up in my mind the image of a snarl-toothed monster. And that's what I expected to see when it was time for him to be lead into the courtroom. Instead, I saw a stooped old man with gray hair and arthritic hands. He stopped in the back of the courtroom and smiled at his elderly parents. His mother cried and reached for him, saying, "We love you Donnie! We always love you." This was the monster? This little old man who asked permission to hug his mother?

I felt cheated. And at the end of the day, I wandered down to the water front, sank down beneath a tree, and cried. I don't know why I cried, but I was so confused. He wasn't supposed to evoke any sense of sympathy in me. I was supposed to take one look at him and shake with rage over the horrific crimes he had committed with those hands. I wasn't supposed to feel bad for his parents. I wasn't supposed to wonder what had happened in his life to turn him into a killer.

And that, to me, is the perfect villain. He's literally the boy next door. He evokes equal levels of fear and sympathy.

I think too many books today take the easy way out with villains. They don't make us think. People are evil for evil's sake. Because we need them to be evil.

It takes a courageous author to write a villain whose demise in the end we don't exactly cheer, but instead makes us wonder, "Did any of this really have to happen?"

Thanks for the great post!
Weez :)

11:06 AM, January 08, 2007  
Blogger Karmela Johnson said...

I can't think of who my favorite villain is right at this moment, but it seems to be always the guy who's the reluctant villain. The one who feels like what he's doing is justifiably right (in his mind) and actually sees himself as THE HERO. Wait, I can name one! Jackie's boyfriend from KNOCKOUT! Yep, I really liked that guy's villain-ness.

PS: I *love* the new photo on your website. Was this taken by hubby? Very cute. And congratulations on the release of POKER DIARIES!

11:21 AM, January 08, 2007  
Blogger Erica Orloff said...

Jude:
I love the way you out it--unraveling on stage. Absolutely.
E

12:02 PM, January 08, 2007  
Blogger Erica Orloff said...

Louise:
Wow . . . utterly chilling. I cannot even imagine.

When I was in college, a friend of mine fell apart and murdered his girlfriend and her family and then turned the shotgun on himself. I had seen him six weeks before this happened. He seemed OK--if always a little fragile. It took me a long while to even digest the events.

E

12:03 PM, January 08, 2007  
Blogger Erica Orloff said...

Karm:
I forgot about Jackie's beau. Yes, He allowed greed to color his world. But a lot of people are greedy. So he had this added screw loose about wanting to be in control.

Thanks--yup . . . he took the picture . . . there are a ton of them and most of them came out really well. There's another one I'll probably post that I like even better, I think. It's all in those soft-focus lenses. :-)
E

12:05 PM, January 08, 2007  
Blogger May said...

Erica, thank goodness I don't have to take the SAT. If I have to take another test, I'll explode. Or implode, take your pick. *shudders at the thought*

FYI, I didn't come up with that, but I can't remember where I read it either. I'm not that smart yet. Someday.

There in Louise's story is a perfect example of what I was trying to say.

12:43 PM, January 08, 2007  
Blogger Erica Orloff said...

May:
I spent last night helping my daughter with Honors Chemistry. It's been ages since I had to look at chemistry--and my brain hurt--but it was fun, too. Balancing equations. Kind of like doing a puzzle.
E

12:45 PM, January 08, 2007  
Blogger Amie Stuart said...

I LOVE Louises breakdown...and I'm looking forward to the new Hanibal movie also.

I have a need to understand human nature, and I'm sure I'm not alone LOL but I find what drives a killer to become a killer absolutely fascinating. Which probably explains why I like suspense above most other genres...

1:37 PM, January 08, 2007  
Blogger Erica Orloff said...

Amie:
Me, too. I will read stories in the news with a sense of shock--how depraved humans can be.
E

1:44 PM, January 08, 2007  
Blogger spyscribbler said...

Great post, Erica. Perfect timing for me--thank you!

5:06 PM, January 08, 2007  
Blogger Erica Orloff said...

Thanks, Spy!

7:23 PM, January 08, 2007  

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