Wednesday, March 14, 2007

It's All in the Details

Do you ever meet someone, or do something, and smile to yourself because you just KNOW you are going to use that detail in a book?

I recently met a gentleman in a restaurant and was introduced. He was confident, tall, and he shook my friggin' hand like he was going to break it while looking at me intensely in the eyes. I hate "fish"-limp handshakes, but THIS, this was bone-crushing. And I thought, what gives? He cannot be oblivious that his grip is like a vise. So I decided, for character's sake, that he had something to prove. He may not. It's immaterial . . . I am going to USE that particular character trait and decide that it's a "something to prove" ego thing.

I love details.

Take Neccos.


If you read my books, no matter what the genre, at some point, my most beloved characters are going to eat Neccos. In Diary of a Blues Goddess, the characters play POKER using Neccos.

When my significant other went to CVS with my eldest daughter (almost 17) and bought me Neccos, she rifled through ALL the packs looking for the rolls with the most WHITE ones. They taste the absolute best. Through some bizarre genetic fluke, she likes the same Necco flavors as I do. We both hate the chocolate ones. Don't like the licorice ones. We hunt for the white ones--sort of cinammon-flavored. Significant Other stood there, dumbfounded. "They have different FLAVORS depending on color?" Of course, they do, idiot. And any true Necco-loving fanatic knows it. And that detail? Goes in the book.

Martinis for my characters have three olives. They like flannel sheets. They hate Jay Leno and love David Letterman. They're often Buddhists. They light candles in Catholic churches, even though they're not Catholic.

You get the idea. I use little details, and sometimes, like I said, I meet someone and think, "You don't know it, buddy, but I'm using that."

How about you? What sort of details do you put in your books or stories?

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13 Comments:

Blogger lainey bancroft said...

OMG! I can't believe I've never eaten a Neccos! Hmm, not even sure I've seen them around here??? Now you know I'll have to look. :)

Your handshake story is such a great example of showing how a small detail can 'show' how one character perceives another. Great stuff.

Margarita's--always lime, and beer--always out of the bottle, never a glass or can.

Because I like writing dialogue best, I'm most likely to catch someone phrasing things uniquely and do the "You don't know it, buddy..." I'm big on accents and quirky facial expressions too. The adorable little yuppie mommy across the street from me couldn't say shit if she had a mouth full of it and even if she's discussing diapers, drool, or mud on her shiny little mini van, she get this hysterical "Oooh, I think I might hurl' curl to her lip. I am sooo using that!

7:28 PM, March 14, 2007  
Blogger Natalie Damschroder said...

LOL on the Neccos! I love them, and I also search through to find the one that is most perfect. For me, it's the one with no blacks and lots of whites AND browns. I like the chocolate ones. :)

9:48 PM, March 14, 2007  
Blogger Jude Hardin said...

I knew a girl in junior high who always picked out the green M&Ms. I later learned that they're supposed to make you horny. I dated that same girl in my senior year of high school. It's true!!!

I remember my childhood pretty well, and sometimes I use details from those days. The kid who always seemed to have a booger hanging from one nostril, for example.

10:08 PM, March 14, 2007  
Blogger Erica Orloff said...

lainey:
You must run out and get some. They are made by the same company that makes those little candy hearts with sayings on them at Valentine's Day time. :-)

And love your description of that mommy--I totally "see" her--of course, since you're an excellent writer!
E

6:53 AM, March 15, 2007  
Blogger Erica Orloff said...

natalie:
I wish they would package them in such a way that you could PICK your colors. :-)
E

6:53 AM, March 15, 2007  
Blogger Erica Orloff said...

jude:
I am sure she was simply horny and it was not the green M&Ms, but if you want to stick with that urban legend, be our guest. ;-)
E

6:55 AM, March 15, 2007  
Blogger Kathy said...

Erica,

I'll make a deal, you send me the ones you don't like, and I'll ship out the white ones to you. (Though I like the white ones, your least likable are my favs.)

Chocolate, in one form or another, appears in my pages. (Love those green M&Ms).

2:08 PM, March 15, 2007  
Blogger Natalie Damschroder said...

Amusingly enough, you can buy just the chocolate ones, but I've never seen them with all of any other flavor. :(

2:37 PM, March 15, 2007  
Blogger Sara Hantz said...

Ok... what is a Necco. I wasn't sure from the packet, is it a sweet or a biscuit???? And how big are they?

3:24 PM, March 15, 2007  
Blogger Erica Orloff said...

kathy:
Deal. We'll start a black market trade in Neccos.
E

3:59 PM, March 15, 2007  
Blogger Erica Orloff said...

natalie:
I swear I am going to write to them. Send them this blog link. LOL!
E

4:00 PM, March 15, 2007  
Blogger Erica Orloff said...

Sara:
Neccos are a candy--they are really thin, round "wafers"--hard as a rock actually, and with a dusting of almost powdered sugar (unintentional, I think it's from the processing). And they are all these colors, each of which has a distinct flavor--but they are all a little "spicey" in flavor. Though the pink one in my humble opinion taste like Pepto Bismol!

My grandmother used to carry them in her purse. She was the only person my whole life to ever take me to church, and she doled them out to keep me quiet as the long Catholic mass droned on. I've been hooked ever since. The Catholic Church, however, I left. :-)
E
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4:03 PM, March 15, 2007  
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