Possibility
I had the most wonderful lesson on writing courtesy of Baby Girl tonight. She is a character in my new trilogy, and she read four chapters, found a typo (a future editor!), and was overall delighted by the book and can't wait to read more. But she taught me the wonder of children and writing YA, the wonder of books.
You see, I need to add a trait or two to the descriptor for her character. A familial trait in the book are pale eyes, but she needs something more to distinguish her. I suggested flecks of violet in her eyes. But she wanted a tattoo since birth on the palm of her hand.
"What? Who would give their kid a tattoo?" (Asks me . . . the ever-vigilant mother.)
"Here," she pointed. "A tiger's eye in the palm of her hand." (Her character has a familiar, a tiger, who protects her.)
"A tattoo?"
"More like a birthmark. Something she was born with."
"A tiger's eye?"
"Yeah."
Case closed.
And there it is. Baby Girl doesn't need logic, she doesn't need to explain it. The character would simply would be born with it. Just as Baby Girl didn't ask HOW it was her character has a Siberian white tiger obeying her every command. She doesn't ask HOW she can sleep with a tiger without getting eaten. It simply is.
Children do not wonder how, so much as accept the realm of possibility and fantasy. They live in a world where things simply are, just as they think the world is fair. Eventually, they learn it isn't, but for a time, the world can be a fair place. For a time, being a good person can be enough. Wishes can come true. Magic is real. Fairies can be real. So can Santa.
We could all use a dose of possibility. Dream it. Don't ask how. Just know it's possible. Maybe that's why I became a writer after all. I never wanted to grow up. And you?
You see, I need to add a trait or two to the descriptor for her character. A familial trait in the book are pale eyes, but she needs something more to distinguish her. I suggested flecks of violet in her eyes. But she wanted a tattoo since birth on the palm of her hand.
"What? Who would give their kid a tattoo?" (Asks me . . . the ever-vigilant mother.)
"Here," she pointed. "A tiger's eye in the palm of her hand." (Her character has a familiar, a tiger, who protects her.)
"A tattoo?"
"More like a birthmark. Something she was born with."
"A tiger's eye?"
"Yeah."
Case closed.
And there it is. Baby Girl doesn't need logic, she doesn't need to explain it. The character would simply would be born with it. Just as Baby Girl didn't ask HOW it was her character has a Siberian white tiger obeying her every command. She doesn't ask HOW she can sleep with a tiger without getting eaten. It simply is.
Children do not wonder how, so much as accept the realm of possibility and fantasy. They live in a world where things simply are, just as they think the world is fair. Eventually, they learn it isn't, but for a time, the world can be a fair place. For a time, being a good person can be enough. Wishes can come true. Magic is real. Fairies can be real. So can Santa.
We could all use a dose of possibility. Dream it. Don't ask how. Just know it's possible. Maybe that's why I became a writer after all. I never wanted to grow up. And you?


19 Comments:
Baby Girl sounds like she's going to be our next Christopher Paolini. That's brilliant!
I am much more of a kid than my students. I grew down, not up.
Lol! I grew down, too. :)
Love this post, E.
I grew up, saw the utter blandness of adulthood, and jumped back on the wagon. Call me a "recovered adult" (and forgive my mixed metaphors).
I was working on a picture book and asked my young daughter what I should name one of the characters. She answered, "Fred Frederick." Fred Frederick he became. Kids are valuable resources to writers.
Spy:
I just love the absolute . . . ordinariness of what they think. I.e., why WOULDN'T you have this birth tattoo?
And you know that's why I love The Little Prince. The theme of childhood is all over it.
E
Hi Heather:
We can all be big kids together.
E
stephen:
Welcome to Recovery.
And I love Fred Frederick.
E
Not why? But why not?
Love it.
I tried the whole grown up schtick for a while too.
Didn't fit. I'm much happier growing down. =)
It's not that I never wanted to grow up; I just couldn't imagine it.
Now that I am officially an Older Person, I have become a younger person in many ways. I am not sure how that happened except that I finally gave myself permission to be playful. Full of play.
Exactly. It's all in how you look at it. Why not?
E
Tena:
I figure when I turn 60, I am buying myself a Vespa--a hot pink or purple one--and will embarass my children and grandchildren. I want to play until they cremate me.
E
Erica, I suggest you buy a hot pink outfit to match.
I love the idea of a tattoo! I'm another one who still wants to play and hold onto the sense of wonder. When this book comes out, Erica, I want to read it.
Hi Tena:
Hot pink it is! :-) And maybe pink streaks in my hair.
E
Hi edie:
The more I slept on it, the more I like it. Creative kid!
E
All sorts of possibilities for that tattoo. I love it!
Kids are amazing sources of inspiration.
I only pretend to be a grown-up sometimes. Like an actor playing a part. Don't tell anyone. It's my secret. :)
Baby Girl is spot on! I'm totally with the philosophy of dream it (feel it, believe it) and it will happen
Possibility exists "now" when you are a child. As you age et becomes a "someday, maybe" thing.
I'm firmly in the regression to childhood camp.
Jude, Ewoh, Sara:
I hadn't realized how many members were in the Peter Pan club.
:-)
E
We've got jackets, a handshake and an oath. Come-on, you know you want to join us ;)
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