Silent Suitcases . . . and Who's In?
First, a word about showing not telling. I watched Infamous last night. Toby Jones was brilliant. And there's this marvelous shot where Truman Capote and Harper Lee, his best friend (did you know that, all you Mockingbird fans?), are at a train station in Kansas. He has a pile of suitcases almost as tall as he is. She has two. The shot is silent--no music, no voiceover, nothing. And I thought it was brilliant. Instead of endless talk, talk, talk about how he was vain, one shot did it all. In writing . . . I look for those silent suitcase moments.
Second, and more important, are you in?
Here's the little back story. Mary Castillo is one of the most generous-of-spirit writers I have ever had the pleasure to meet in cyberspace. One of these days, we'll meet in person, but until then, this is how we "met."She reached out to me one night a while ago to say she had written this review of "Do They Wear High Heels in Heaven?" on her blog (January 15th entry). I was touched because her review hit on aspects of the book that were personally meaningful to me--themes and thoughts I had about my own characters. She "got" it, and by extension, me. Then I read In Between Men, and I laughed, and I related . . . sometimes our inner goddess gets blurred and lost by motherhood and respectability. Of course, I'm not terribly respectable--but I related, believe me.
We wrote each other emails. I learned about Little Dude and saw pictures of that cutie. I sent her JPEGs of Demon, and the computer wires didn't even catch on fire. Mary is a hero of mine. She's Wonder Woman. She gives back to writers and to students (she's a new mentor to high school kids). She's the real deal.
AND SO, Mary is having a "Book In A Week" on Chica Lit, her blog. You can read how it works. We don't REALLY write a book in a week (though, as she says, if you want to, vaya con Díos). We set a page goal and go at it for a week, offering some support, checking in daily with our page count. On Saturday, we hoist a glass of cyber-champagne no matter how we did. It's a way to kick-start that book, or to keep up with your New Year's Resolutions. Or to just come play with me over on Mary's blog.
And I thought . . . and this may not work . . . but if enough of you all are in, and someone with FAR superior technical ability that I could somehow set up a chat room for us, or if we all shared IM names, we could set up a celebration next Saturday, or even a daily check-in. As an utter techno-failure (yes, Ewoh, I still don't know how to set the alarm clock timer on my coffee maker) . . . that's optional. But in the meantime, if you are in, I'd love to see you on Mary's blog.
Have a great Saturday, gang, and tell me . . . how do you show not tell?
Second, and more important, are you in?
Here's the little back story. Mary Castillo is one of the most generous-of-spirit writers I have ever had the pleasure to meet in cyberspace. One of these days, we'll meet in person, but until then, this is how we "met."She reached out to me one night a while ago to say she had written this review of "Do They Wear High Heels in Heaven?" on her blog (January 15th entry). I was touched because her review hit on aspects of the book that were personally meaningful to me--themes and thoughts I had about my own characters. She "got" it, and by extension, me. Then I read In Between Men, and I laughed, and I related . . . sometimes our inner goddess gets blurred and lost by motherhood and respectability. Of course, I'm not terribly respectable--but I related, believe me.
We wrote each other emails. I learned about Little Dude and saw pictures of that cutie. I sent her JPEGs of Demon, and the computer wires didn't even catch on fire. Mary is a hero of mine. She's Wonder Woman. She gives back to writers and to students (she's a new mentor to high school kids). She's the real deal.
AND SO, Mary is having a "Book In A Week" on Chica Lit, her blog. You can read how it works. We don't REALLY write a book in a week (though, as she says, if you want to, vaya con Díos). We set a page goal and go at it for a week, offering some support, checking in daily with our page count. On Saturday, we hoist a glass of cyber-champagne no matter how we did. It's a way to kick-start that book, or to keep up with your New Year's Resolutions. Or to just come play with me over on Mary's blog.
And I thought . . . and this may not work . . . but if enough of you all are in, and someone with FAR superior technical ability that I could somehow set up a chat room for us, or if we all shared IM names, we could set up a celebration next Saturday, or even a daily check-in. As an utter techno-failure (yes, Ewoh, I still don't know how to set the alarm clock timer on my coffee maker) . . . that's optional. But in the meantime, if you are in, I'd love to see you on Mary's blog.
Have a great Saturday, gang, and tell me . . . how do you show not tell?
Labels: Book in a Week, Mary Castillo, showing vs. telling


26 Comments:
A book in a week? Or any nontrivial part thereof? I'd rather chew rocks.
Wait a minute, I'm supposed to show, not tell. Okay:
"I'd rather chew rocks," he said.
I couldn't help overhearing you tell Mary that you bought some bras and had them "professionally fitted." I was wondering if, you know, there were, like, any job openings in that part of the store.
Actually my friend wants to know.
Stephen:
First of all . . . I'm in for 100 pages. You can be in for 10. Or 5. The numbers not important. The kick-starting and comraderie is.
As for the bras . . . I don't believe there are any openings at the store, Buddy. But it was definitely an experience I am going to put in a BOOK. These Southern women, practicing a totally dying profession of fitting women--my fitter was 70 and a hoot and a half. The store was a riot. It was really one of the most fun days my daughter and I ever spent, and we left with lots of lacy things. :-)
And what friend is this?
LOL!
E
Ha, anal Lainey sharpened her pencil and listed all the things she'd intended to get done next week, but her evil twin stepped in and shouted "Feckitt! Who are you to deny us the opportunity to play with accomplished writers and maybe...accomplish something?"
So yeah, we're...I"M in!
I can even handle a chat room, but that's as far as my techno skills go. And I can't guarantee you'll understand a thing I 'say' with the typing boo-boos!
But I'm not swearing to 100 pages! Holy mama. That must be a titanium sports-bra with a built in computer that turns dictation to text that you bought!
YAY! Lainey.
And no, it's not titanium. LOL!!!
Hustle over to Mary's . . . .
And we're in this together. Support. Getting the hell out of Stuck-itis!
E
Oh gosh, I'm so in. You have no idea what perfect timing this is!
And just this week I tried to explain a guy I once knew on my blog, and it was impossible! I would need to write a story so I could show it, because I couldn't remember any real events, LOL. Telling just dosn't work.
About the blurry inner goddess, I think it's a condition of working with children that we feel like we failed at some small thing nearly every day. Or maybe that's life, LOL.
Hey Spy:
All right . . . we're getting a posse together.
E
Where's that sign up sheet? I'm IN! I was just thinking I need a kickstart for my WIP. As for pages, let me think about that for a second.
Liz:
Go over to Mary's blog. She's the keeper of the pages . . . but then we'll do some sort of group celebration on this blog.
E
Thanks for linking to Mary's blog! I stopped over, and it looks great. Yet another blog to add to my blogreader...
Hey Erica! I'm doing the BIAW too. Great timing. I emailed Mary with a question. I look forward to the party!
Sounds good to me - I'm in!!
Hey Ladonna and Amy:
All right . . . we're getting quite a posse together.
E
I signed up for 25, but will strive for 50.
Heather:
NO delete button this week. :-)
E
I'd love to but I can't. Unless I can do it with edits. I have some ideas for the next book I'm writing, but I'm just in the embryo planning stages and it's a book I know I can't rush.
Hey Zoe:
Maybe the next one we do . . .
E
So... do you have to be of the female persuasion to play? It sounds like a good deal of fun and Mary is totally in my backyard as far as geography goes.
I can easily setup a chat room for instant messaging.
Hi Ewoh:
Stephen is too chicken to play. Or he would rather "chew rocks." But no, MEN are MORE than welcome, dear Ewoh.
E
I'm doing stray crits on one book and researching the other. Maybe next time for me too. Sounds like fun.
I was joking. I signed up right away.
Stephen:
Decided to come play with the big boys? ;-) Great! See you there . . . and Ewoh?? How do we do a chat room?
And Stephen . . . if we set up a writing chat--what time? I am EST, Ewoh is PST--we got people in the middle, Lainey in Canada, but YOU are the major monkey wrench in Europe.
E
One monkey don't steal the whole show.
Wasn't there a song in the seventies by that title? Anyway, you guys pick the time most convenient for you, and if necessary I'll set my alarm clock.
I've never been in a chat room before. Isn't that where teenagers hang out and write in lower case and abbreviations? i do it 4 u.
hehe okay Erica. I'd love to join in, but joining every "finish this rough draft in this amount of time with this many people" group is why I have 2 novels and a novella to edit. I iz behind.
stephen:
U R 2 kewl. U will B fine in the chat room.
L8R, Dude.
E
Hi Erica... most IM clients have the option to Join Group in the File menu. If you pick a name for a group and it is already there you will join it... if you pick a unique name that group is then created and you become the defacto leader of that group. Then you just choose to invite people and put the IM name in the proper place and send.
If you tell me what IM software you are using I can get more specific on the directions.
You can count me in for 10 pages. I may not make it but I'll go down swinging :)
Just thinking I'll have to go to Mayry's site to actually make that official...
Hi Eowh:
I have AIM.
I probably have other stuff too. I just don't use it . . . I have Netscape . . .
E
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