Everyperson
I've never rescued anyone from a burning building. Never done CPR on anything but a plastic dummy. I've never done anything I consider heroic. I live my life like most people. I raise my kids, I pray, I go to the store, I cook bad meals (though I made some homemade meatballs and "gravy" this Sunday that was kick-ass). I've done some things that pushed the envelope of my comfort zone on occasion. I've gone into some truly scary neighborhoods to help kids in crisis. I've seen a need sometimes, and done something about it. And I realize that the world can really be divided, in some ways, between those people who would walk by a homeless person, those who would hand the homeless person a buck, and those who would take that person to get showered and give them fresh clothes and a meal.
Take another social cause or crisis if that one doesn't suit you. One person sees their neighborhood going to hell. And moves out. One person organizes a grassroots effort to take back the neighborhood from the gangs and the drug dealers. Even at the possible cost of their life.
Or take this. Or take this. Why do some citizens stand by and do nothing? Why do some speak out even when it means certain death?
I've been thinking about the hero of Magickeepers. He's really an ordinary kid, who happens to discover he is from a magical lineage. But he's an everykid. He likes skateboarding and he hates school. He likes videogames and cheeseburgers. He loves to drink a lot of caffiene and stay up all night on the weekends. He grows his hair long enough to seem rebellious but short enough he still gets the girls. And he comes to accept this tremendous mantle of responsibility--he does it for his "people" . . . his clan. Not because he really wants to but because he gains the maturity to understand it's what must be done.
And then I got to thinking about everyman, everywoman, everykid. Those heroes who live lives of complete obscurity until something--and the reason is different for each person--pushes them beyond the confines of their world to do something great, something heroic.
So much of our best fiction is about that person, right? And sometimes at the end of the book, all that person wants to do is go back to their life of obscurity. Save the world and go back to their hometown and raise their kids, go fishing, read a book, tend their garden. Doesn't matter what it is they want to go back to. Of course, we always sense that after they've saved the world, their lives will never quite be the same.
I think, as writers, it's the fabric of the character that can make these plots believable. And enjoyable. Most of us don't want to open a book about Captain Perfect and Ms. Exceptional. Not from the outset. We want to see their lives turned upside-down and what precise set of circumstances takes him or her from comfort to action.
I know with my Magickeepers hero, he's never had a clan, a family. And at first, he bristles at the rules and the nosiness, the drama that is always there with these crazy Russians, as he (and I) call them. But then, when they are threatened, he realizes they are his PEOPLE. His Russian homeboys. HE can hate them, but don't let anyone else f*ck with the family.
I think about what would compel me to take action. My kids are an obvious answer. But I've taken them into some risky situations along with me. I know when we went to protest on Washington, Demon Baby wasn't even walking yet. I thought, "What if the crowd is harassed or we all get arrested? What if there's violence?" Yet I wanted them to know some things are worth getting arrested for. Even little Demon. We have a voice. We can use it. (Though I did think I wasn't an "obvious" arrest choice because of the baby.) I've taken them with me into some of those truly frightening neighborhoods with prostitutes and dealers on the sidewalks. I wanted them to know we have two hands to help. We can use them. BUT . . . I've had the sort of "Good Samaritan" faith to think angels watch out for us when we do things like that. And really, Tibet shows me that's not always so. The Civil Rights movement showed me that isn't always the case. So I think as writers we have to dig deeper. Is it a cause? A movement? A faith? Present danger? A people? A culture? And where does the hero or heroine draw the line? And . . . even more so . . . when does the hero or heroine realize they're going forward even if it means true danger?
Do you have an everyperson in your wip? And what motivates him or her?
Take another social cause or crisis if that one doesn't suit you. One person sees their neighborhood going to hell. And moves out. One person organizes a grassroots effort to take back the neighborhood from the gangs and the drug dealers. Even at the possible cost of their life.
Or take this. Or take this. Why do some citizens stand by and do nothing? Why do some speak out even when it means certain death?
I've been thinking about the hero of Magickeepers. He's really an ordinary kid, who happens to discover he is from a magical lineage. But he's an everykid. He likes skateboarding and he hates school. He likes videogames and cheeseburgers. He loves to drink a lot of caffiene and stay up all night on the weekends. He grows his hair long enough to seem rebellious but short enough he still gets the girls. And he comes to accept this tremendous mantle of responsibility--he does it for his "people" . . . his clan. Not because he really wants to but because he gains the maturity to understand it's what must be done.
And then I got to thinking about everyman, everywoman, everykid. Those heroes who live lives of complete obscurity until something--and the reason is different for each person--pushes them beyond the confines of their world to do something great, something heroic.
So much of our best fiction is about that person, right? And sometimes at the end of the book, all that person wants to do is go back to their life of obscurity. Save the world and go back to their hometown and raise their kids, go fishing, read a book, tend their garden. Doesn't matter what it is they want to go back to. Of course, we always sense that after they've saved the world, their lives will never quite be the same.
I think, as writers, it's the fabric of the character that can make these plots believable. And enjoyable. Most of us don't want to open a book about Captain Perfect and Ms. Exceptional. Not from the outset. We want to see their lives turned upside-down and what precise set of circumstances takes him or her from comfort to action.
I know with my Magickeepers hero, he's never had a clan, a family. And at first, he bristles at the rules and the nosiness, the drama that is always there with these crazy Russians, as he (and I) call them. But then, when they are threatened, he realizes they are his PEOPLE. His Russian homeboys. HE can hate them, but don't let anyone else f*ck with the family.
I think about what would compel me to take action. My kids are an obvious answer. But I've taken them into some risky situations along with me. I know when we went to protest on Washington, Demon Baby wasn't even walking yet. I thought, "What if the crowd is harassed or we all get arrested? What if there's violence?" Yet I wanted them to know some things are worth getting arrested for. Even little Demon. We have a voice. We can use it. (Though I did think I wasn't an "obvious" arrest choice because of the baby.) I've taken them with me into some of those truly frightening neighborhoods with prostitutes and dealers on the sidewalks. I wanted them to know we have two hands to help. We can use them. BUT . . . I've had the sort of "Good Samaritan" faith to think angels watch out for us when we do things like that. And really, Tibet shows me that's not always so. The Civil Rights movement showed me that isn't always the case. So I think as writers we have to dig deeper. Is it a cause? A movement? A faith? Present danger? A people? A culture? And where does the hero or heroine draw the line? And . . . even more so . . . when does the hero or heroine realize they're going forward even if it means true danger?
Do you have an everyperson in your wip? And what motivates him or her?
Labels: everyman, hero's journey


23 Comments:
Generally speaking, I've focused on the so-called professionals, the cop, the PI, the terrorism expert.
That said, one of my earlier potential series' (as well as Dirty Deeds, now that I think of it) featured an everyman kind of character, a single-father college professor whose field just happened to be toxicology, who finds himself tied up in a murder investigation, and then starts consulting for the medical examiner's office.
I think those unpublished (or almost published, but I had a publisher go bankrupt on me with them) manuscripts were good and I liked putting this everyman into situations where he was forced to use his wits, but one of the complaints of editors was they just didn't buy his involvement in these situations. That's probably an excuse, since I can name off the top of my head probably a dozen successful mystery series (Jonathan Kellerman's Alex Delaware, anyone?) where this is exactly the case, but for whatever reason, it didn't catch on, whereas, to some degree, my "professionals" did.
That said, I've seriously considered a couple of my story ideas might be even more interesting if instead of a spy I had a journalist caught in the same situation, or in the case of a police procedural I was dabbling with, it might work better if the main character was the innocent man accused of the crime. I tend to think of books as potential series, but these sorts of characters lend themselves better to standalones, I think.
Hi Mark:
Over at Marcia's Collette's blog a bit ago, we breifly touched on this idea. I was saying how if you
re not careful, you can end up with a "Murder She Wrote" unbelievability. Like how many possible murders is this one person going to get involved with. So I agree, it's sometimes better as a stand-alone. Depends. Jon Talton (repped by my agent) has done pretty well with an Everyman who is a history professor (I think) who can't get a job and ends up clearing out old police cases (something along those lines . . .). It's a pretty cool intersection of smart Everyman and the cops.
E
Great post.
I think I'm most drawn to heroes who start as "everypeople," but are given some kind of extraordinary power or ability, which they then must decide how to use. I'm thinking of Spider-Man and Uncle Ben's famous line, "With great power comes great responsibility."
At least for me, this kind of hero resonates because I believe it's a metaphor for all people. I think everyone has extraordinary power inside of themselves, even if many of us never really recognize it or put it to use. In most cases, it's not super strength or genius intellect or magic or the ability to fly, but simply the ability to choose. By that I mean that my heroes (in life, and hopefully in my books) are people who make a conscious decision to bend their will and their personal power in the service of good.
What separates me (as a regular dad and a working joe) from Spider-Man is scale: my powers are tiny by comparison, thus my circle of influence is smaller by necessity. But ultimately, I think that's why the hero resonates so strongly: because given the same powers, all of us at least hope that we would have the strength and willpower to make the same decisions for the benefit of humanity.
JVZ
Wow Erica, what a powerful post! I am in admiration for your powerful beliefs that motivate you. I am also so happy to have gotten more about Magickeepers!
My MCs are always ordinary people in extraordinary circumstances. I think that is what I can relate to best.
Hi JVZ:
You said it much more succinctly than I did. Yes . . . I think it's very much the idea that we all HOPE if given the chance we would save the world. Do something powerful.
E
I'm never quite sure how my character is going to react to a given situation until he faces it.
Heroism...you know, I don't want my protagonist to fall into the "too stupid to live" category where he's always charging in wrecklessly where angels fear to tread. Even cops and PIs and firefighters and Navy Seals have to be clever and think about what they're doing if they expect to keep on doing it another day.
In my last book, my four women protagonists went to bat for each other. One of the big character arcs was a young woman who'd been brutally raped years ago, coming out of her silence and going public with her ordeal to help another rape victim. That's a different form of bravery.
I don't like to talking too much about a book I'm working on, but my wip starts off with an everywoman helping someone else, and this act changes lives.
Hi Ello:
I relate to that sort of character too. I am reading a spiritual book on how comfort becomes . . . so comfortable, we don't grow. Extraordinary circumstances can be terrifying, but they do make us grow by leaps and bounds sometimes.
E
Jude:
Exactly. No TSTL stuff . . . but I also know sometimes, with the right motivation, we do TSTL things. Which is why Mark makes such a salient point. Sometimes these types of characters are better as stand-alones.
E
Hi Edie:
Sometimes an act of quiet dignity (like the Dalai Lama) is more powerful than tanks and guns.
E
Erica, I find magic in the ordinary. Relationship books give me a big field to play in.
My MCs are ordinary, but caught up in extra-ordinary circumstances. They usually always are dealing with some type of inadequacy and during the course of the story will have to deal with it, resolve it.
My last three females have been broke, dirt, literally coming from no one and having nothing, all alone. I seem obsessed with this sort of character, lately, and it's been interesting to see how they're all so different. (I forget that I create these characters. Sometimes, they're just like people I'm fascinated with and want to explore.)
In thrillers and mysteries, it's a strange walk. Like you said, the Murder She Writes problem stretches credibility too far, but then the kick-ass heroines have a greater challenge in being relatable to the reader.
Then again, even experts in their field can have something of the "everyman" about them, if you do it right. I don't know.
Hi Ladonna:
The strength of women. . . . . :-)
E
EwoH:
I think that speaks to what Jon was talking about . . . finding the everyday person's strength.
E
Hi Spy:
I personally think that's a good way to apporach it--the person with special skills--who has an everyday quality. Like Patterson's Cross. Brilliant? Yes. But then he's living with his grandmother and playing the piano on his porch.
In one of my wips I have a woman who tries to help someone and ends up on the beach,naked and running for her life. When asked why she put herself in a dangerous situation she explains because so and so needed help.
Simple?
I think in real life courage is sometimes just doing the right thing. I heard an interview once where a man rescued someone and when the reporter pressed him on how he could be so brave he said that courage was just panic holding out a moment longer. He moved before he had time to panic about what his actions might cost him.
On the other side, when I taught woman's self defense one of the most important thing we taught was to get mad. Anger puts power behind the action. Fear makes people recoil. We told them to use the thought, "How dare he touch me" instead of "Oh no, I've been grabbed." Anger aside, the determination to do the right thing can also be a powerful force. I think emotion drives it but it has to be a powerful emotion.
Am I losing my train of thought here? lol
Aimless:
Not at all. I took martial arts for years and learned to tap into my power versus my fear.
E
"But"??? I think the fact that he plays piano points to his brilliance, not his everydayness.
;-)
I really have to read Patterson. I have no idea why I never have. I just read 1 in 35 books sold are by Patterson. I'm not sure what to think of that, LOL.
SPy:
LOL! I didn't mean it that playing piano wasn't brilliant. :-) But he's an ordinary player, just playing on this old upright in a very . . . somewhat rundown neighborhood. He has a home life that is like many people's. And nothing about his outside-work life reflects his reknown as this genius crime solver.
E
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